Friday Writings #159: Making It New

Hello again, dear Word Weavers.

I very much hope that none of our USA participants are in the middle of the horrendous Los Angeles fires!

On a happier note, I trust you enjoyed our end-of-year break. I am still partly in holiday mode, having had a very pleasant — and lazy — time of much reading, watching TV, and getting together with friends.

Writing? Not so very much. However I did embark on one strange little project.

I have long been a member of the Found Haiku group on facebook, and realised I hadn’t posted there in a while. So I began to actively look for haiku in unexpected places: some happy juxtaposition of words never intended as a haiku at all.

Here is an old one I found on my own front window. The bottom sign was there when Andrew and I moved in here at the start of 2010; the other I added some time later. Later still, I glanced at the two in conjunction and realised I had found a haiku:

 

warning —
fairies live here
(Neighbourhood Watch)

from my front window

In the last few days, actively searching, I have found some in a magazine, a book, and one in a longer poem of my own:

Feline

In the dim light
he is hard to see,
the tawny tiger
resting in the height
of the shadowy green
in the sly dark.

Though his face is dark,
his eyes gleam light
not yellow but green,
and I know he can see
where I try to hide,
my fabulous tiger.

And I can see, against the green
of the bedroom chair in which he hides,
my cat in the dark with eyes of light.


April Poem A Day Challenge 2014, day 13: an animal poem. Suggestion: use a sestina. As I am having an insanely busy April, I opted for a mini-sestina, a form devised by Aussie poet Myron Lysenko.
(Published in the collaborative collection She Too, CXD, 2014).

which became:

tawny tiger —
my cat in the dark
with eyes of light

(Intended not as a replacement but a new poem.)


I then wondered how many more haiku I might find in my longer poems and set about hunting. It was fun, and quite exciting, and reminded me of the whole concept of remixing.

The definition of remix in Wikipedia is: 'A remix ... is a piece of media which has been altered or contorted from its original state by adding, removing, or changing pieces of the item. A song, piece of artwork, book, poem, or photograph can all be remixes. The only characteristic of a remix is that it appropriates and changes other materials to create something new.' 

That suggests that one takes someone else's artwork to make one's own remix; however I don't see why we can't remix our own originals too.

 
Prompt:
So, for your optional prompt this week, I invite you to look through your writings and see if there is anything you might remix to make a new piece. You needn’t turn them into haiku (unless you want to); there are many possibilities. Please add a link to the original piece if possible, or if not include it as a note on your new post.

Guidelines:
One post per person.
369 words maximum (excluding title and notes).
Old or new / poetry or prose / on prompt or not.
When possible, please enjoy and comment on each other’s posts. (Talk to us here too, if you’d like.)

Preview:

Next week, our Rommy will ask us to reflect on the phrase "low battery".